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*ODlN May 17, 2009, 3:00:03 PM
Nice little story. You have the colors right. It looks very cartoonish if that's what you're going for. I do see a little improvement. But it would help if you have things like a dynamic angle. You can also look up running poses from characters like "Meanstreak" from X-Men2099, "the Flash", and look up screen shots from cartoons like Sonic the Hedgehog, or the movie "The Incredibles with that super fast kid (I forget his name). Youtube has some awesome tutorials for doing up people. The sea of heartless doing that 'tidal wave' look is very interesting.

Of course, people know what this is just by looking at it so you've done your job well enough. My hats off to you and keep up the good work.

Also, is that Disney Castle or the Castle from Super Mario64?
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*MetalShadowOverlord May 17, 2009, 4:11:18 PM
HA! It DOES look like Peach's Castle! XD I screwed that up big time... I kinda have a problem with angles and stuff. I should really practice with that. :nod: Thanks for critiquing! I'm glad you're enjoying Shaxir's comedic escapades! :D

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- Dan Halen, Squidbillies (A Sober Sunday)
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*ODlN May 17, 2009, 4:13:21 PM
One more thing. Watch the cut scenes from sonic the hedgehog for PS3. You can see some great dynamic shots.

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"A decade of balling the same woman and never straying. Love rules, sure; but sex enforces." ~ Director/Writer: Kevin Smith
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*MetalShadowOverlord May 17, 2009, 5:12:48 PM
I would, but dial-up makes watching videos on Youtube difficult. (I swear they ought to outlaw dial up. -_-) I sorta know how to make the angled shots, but it always comes out like crap. :( Maybe I should look for written tutorials on angled shots instead.

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-Many who live deserve death, but some who die deserve life.-

"The world is MINE :evillaugh: ...but I'll share it only with you :hug: ."
-MSO

"Jesus loves you. Why doesn't the government?" :shrug:
- Dan Halen, Squidbillies (A Sober Sunday)
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*ODlN May 17, 2009, 5:16:42 PM
Ask someone's permissions to trace or use bases on DA. There is nothing wrong with that.

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"A decade of balling the same woman and never straying. Love rules, sure; but sex enforces." ~ Director/Writer: Kevin Smith
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*MetalShadowOverlord May 17, 2009, 5:55:07 PM
Tracing? Eh, I always looked at tracing as the easy way out, but I suppose I could do it for practice and not post the traced. I guess that'd work.

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-Many who live deserve death, but some who die deserve life.-

"The world is MINE :evillaugh: ...but I'll share it only with you :hug: ."
-MSO

"Jesus loves you. Why doesn't the government?" :shrug:
- Dan Halen, Squidbillies (A Sober Sunday)
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*ODlN May 17, 2009, 5:57:28 PM
Tracing is an essential part of art. I get angry when people whine about tracing because it's what I do as a tattoo artist.

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"A decade of balling the same woman and never straying. Love rules, sure; but sex enforces." ~ Director/Writer: Kevin Smith
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*MetalShadowOverlord May 18, 2009, 12:47:21 PM
You're a tattoo artist? Neat! :D I guess I'll try tracing then. :nod:

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-Many who live deserve death, but some who die deserve life.-

"The world is MINE :evillaugh: ...but I'll share it only with you :hug: ."
-MSO

"Jesus loves you. Why doesn't the government?" :shrug:
- Dan Halen, Squidbillies (A Sober Sunday)
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